word doodlepalooza2: day 4: Kaci Edition

Hi. Kaci was kind enough to share this piece with us today.  Still a couple days left for you to submit.

Laying there
Your chest
Rising, falling
Each breath
Takes you
Deeper
Further
Into Dreamland
Your face
Emotionless
As you
Dream
About fish, deer
Or dragons
Your hand
Instinctively
Or maybe not
Grips mine
Whenever
I intertwine
Our fingers
Watching you
Laying there
Drifting further into
Dreamland
Would you still love me
If I threw a kitten
Claws and teeth
And all
On you
To wake you up?

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3 Responses to “word doodlepalooza2: day 4: Kaci Edition”

  1. Hänni October 12, 2009 at 11:43 am # Reply

    Is it creepy I think this is really sweet?

  2. J October 12, 2009 at 4:58 pm # Reply

    Very good K.

  3. Shelley October 13, 2009 at 10:13 am # Reply

    This is GREAT!

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