The Waiting is the Longest Part

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  1. Cait says:

    I love this… additional points for the Motley Crue. Negative points for the Ohio State reference.
    I was beginning to think that this girl, Shari, had something wrong with her. The guy was adorable, and I’d be laughing along to all of his antics.

  2. Peter says:

    Thanks! You know what’s funny? While writing, I planned on having the son attend Florida, but then remembered your comment from the other day and changed it. I thought it would be amusing… to me. And it was! :)

  3. Rachel says:

    Oh COME ON!!!! FINNISH IT! You’re driving me crazy here! i loved it until i read the last line you big tease!

  4. MissE says:

    That was brilliant.

    You’re a talented writer and I can’t imagine how much better it could have sounded in your head, Peter, because that was a wonderful read.

  5. Steph says:

    I hate it when you do that!!!!
    You are such an awesome story teller Mr Dewolf. Please don’t keep me in suspenders much longer :P

  6. Rachel says:

    oohh steph in suspenders! Now that’s something i’ve gotta see!

  7. Airam says:

    This is amazing. If I read this somewhere as an excerpt to a book I would be buying that book. It was that good.

  8. Marti says:

    Wow, what a story! I am on pins and needles (ouch!) waiting to find out what happens!

  9. MrSka says:

    That was stupendous. More, MORE!!

    There’s a whole other story about why the old guy knew Motley Crew lyrics.

  10. Amber says:

    Okay, I LOVED that story – it really draws you in and I agree with cait about laughing at his antics.

    HOWEVER, I feel like I just had sex and he nutted before I got mine.

    In other words, SERIOUSLY CHEATED!

    So, are you going to finish the story and tell us what happens or leave us hanging?? I have a million questions running through my head, haha.

    You’ve got talent, Peter DeWolf! (psst, but you already knew that, didn’t you ;))

  11. Peter says:

    rachel: I have a plan for telling more of the story. We’ll see how it goes. :)

    misse: Thanks so much! It just had more… oomph in my head before I started typing.

    steph: Thanks! You may have to wait a bit longer.

    airam: Wow. That is so sweet of you to say. And funny you should mention it…

    marti: Thanks! I appreciate the kind words.

    mrska: I think that EVERYONE should know Crue lyrics. And thanks!

    amber: Thanks to you too! I do have plans to finish the story, but in a different way…

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