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  1. MissE says:

    Writing query – just curious, Peter. How do you decide where you’re gonna put your line breaks? Is it a whim kind of a thing or do you have specific purpose in mind?

  2. Peter says:

    MissE: It arrives in my head with a certain cadence, and I basically just transcribe it.

  3. MissE says:

    It’s just something we’ve been looking at in class and I was curious.

    I’m basically the same – the line just feels like it should end at a certain point… although sometimes when I go back to edit it, that feeling can change.

    You write some amazing stuff, Peter

  4. Deutlich says:

    oooh.. someone got buurrneed

  5. JenBun says:

    Would you mind terribly if I had this printed out on cards, changed the “her” to “him,” and handed them out when things just don’t go right?




    (P.S. I love it. These lines?

    my smile was
    an optical delusion

    it wasn’t your smile
    that made me wantneed
    or sighgrowl

    Amazing. You’ve done it again!)

  6. Colleen Snell says:

    wow. if only she could be her.

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