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  1. James Cooper says:

    I just can’t identify with kids these days. I hear “cooties” and it ignites some familiarity but then they just lost me from there. Kids…

  2. Steph says:

    LMAO, that is so funny, although I hear that these days the kids are more concerned about Hep C. ;)

  3. sara says:

    I think I heard this same conversation while on recess duty with my second graders last spring. But they were going to pull Margarita’s pigtails…

  4. Peter says:

    James: Would you believe that I’ve never even played “duck duck goose.”

    Steph: Scary but true, eh?

    Sara: What is it with pigtails?

  5. Kukka-Maria says:

    Love it.

    When you’re a girl, your pigtails are the only things that hang off of you. When you’re a woman, men grab for the chest.

    Pervs…all of them!

  6. LG says:

    Very cute.

    I know it’s only a blog and you didn’t ask, but do be careful of using things like “just” and “moments of silence” when you write. Try and find an actual action that expresses what you mean – characters are always doing something, even when they’re doing nothing.

    I really like the angles you attack from and hope you continue to develop your craft. Sorry if you think I’m out of line here – yada, yada, best intentions…

  7. Peter says:

    k-m: boys drool!

    lg: No worries. I always appreciate feedback.

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