just before waking up

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12 Responses

  1. MissE says:

    LOVE it!

  2. claytonsgrrl says:

    “It felt like someone else was running his hands, as they found themselves on her hips. Hips he had never touched before. Hips he tried never to look directly at.”

    This part is beautiful. I love the repetition.

  3. Sonny Amou says:

    Nice closer…so is this part of a larger story that lies elsewhere on this blog? I felt like I jumped into a story midstream (that could be the point).

  4. JenBun says:

    Umm, your writing with the flu is sexier and more captivating than most people writing at the top of their game!

    I second misse: LOVE it!

    You never cease to amaze, DeWolf.

  5. A Lil' Irish Lass says:

    Ooh, you give me fever.

    And not the kind that’s accompanying your flu.

    Hot, Peter DeWolf. Very hot indeed.

  6. Pink's Pal says:

    Not gonna lie…I’m a little turned on.

    -L

  7. Essentially Me says:

    Holy crap Peter!!! Damn!!!

  8. sid says:

    God I loved this. Mills and Boons could really use someone like you.

  9. Hollywood Sucker says:

    I like that even though I didn’t really know what happened with that girl’s dad, I didn’t care that much because they had such an interesting chemistry.

  10. fiorella says:

    so in between the bachelor, gossip girl, packrat and talking to me you somehow find the time to write something like this? ;) amazing.

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