better than perfect

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  1. Doni says:

    “I like it all that way.”

    Now you have BSS in my head.

  2. Amanda says:

    My first handful of thoughts contained expletives, so I’m going with this comment instead: after being impressed with your willingness to publish poems here, I was inspired to try writing my own again. And I TOTALLY wrote a poem thingy a little while ago that reminds me of this one, in the way it unites sensual and sensory perceptions. Only, I felt like it read too Harlequin-ish at the end. Blech. So later on I re-focused the subject and turned it into my drabble (!). (During which of course I ended up changing almost all the words.) So at this point, you may as well give yourself a big ol’ pat on the back for inspiring so much creativity in others; we’re not going to mention what the poem itself inspires in others.

  3. JenBun says:

    Yes.

    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh yes!

  4. Shelley says:

    Pretty sure this is my new favourite.

  5. I’ve read better. Just sayin

    miss you.

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