15 Minute Short Story

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12 Responses

  1. molly says:

    You should shoot the poop with me more often. Because that was awesome.

  2. mindy says:

    Remind me never to set you up with any of my friends.

  3. Peter says:

    molly: Thanks! That was fun. I liked the pressure of the ticking clock.

    mindy: If I ask them to scratch my back, they should probably go ahead and just scratch my back.

  4. sybil law says:

    Hahaa that was great! Minus the part about the short arms. Short arms…. eewwww.

  5. Peter says:

    sybil: I suppose that he kind of needed them for the story.

  6. Clink says:

    I seriously, as in no joke, it absolutely happened, spit out some water I was drinking at the last line.

    Your protagonist and I have much in common: neither one of us can much stand girls who quote incessently from “SATC” and also, I love a good back scratch.

  7. Miriam says:

    Haha. You’re silly. Was she in a full body cast conveniently created by the cement from the cement truck?

  8. distracted spunk says:

    I think I might be in love with your blog. And because your short story made me giggle.

  9. lfar says:

    judges + ebay addiction = bad news.

    My Little Pony was kind of cool though, back when.

  10. CamiKaos says:

    that was pretty awesome. you should do NaNoWriMo.

  11. Princess of the Universe says:

    What is it about guys always wanting back scratches??
    That story kind of freaked me out a bit Peter…

  12. Peter says:

    clink: Whooo! There is no higher form of compliment than a spit take.

    miriam: Wait… I’m SILLY?

    distracted spunk: My blog appreciates your love! It’s really kind of needy.

    lisa: Now I have the My Little Pony song from the commercial in my head!

    camikaos: Thanks! I tried it last year, but felt like it was bossing me around.

    princess: Freaked out is cool. As long as it’s not “bored.”

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